Ambersmudge

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Ambersmudge
A Player Character played by HummingDaze

Affiliation
RiverClan Warrior
Vitals
A Female cat who identifies Female.
By Unknown Sire out of Pending Dam.
Living at the age of 20 Moons (1.5 Years)
Appearance
 
Short Description:

A long tailed, cinnamon colored she-cat with copper eyes

Long Description:

Ambersmudge has a short-haired, cinnamon colored coat with a dense texture. She barely needs to clean their fur because of how short it is, yet will do so if any sight of mud or sticky material gets stuck onto it.
Her eyes are wide, her eye-color is purely copper, and her nose color is dark-ish brown. She is average height and size combared to other warriors. Her tail is pretty long and thick, matching the full coat texture she carries.

Personality
 
 

Ambersmudge is a vocally social and pleasant feline. Her way of communication is settled with a gentle tone, approaching anyone with a joyous vibe. A sense of curiosity could give Ambersmudge in a trance and feel the need to know. She carries less anxiety when it comes to interactions, and is willing to share her daily experience or opinion first. She can become a good listener if there’s a conversation she doesn’t want to miss out on.

She scans for any sight of prey that’ll show up in the typical spot around the Upper West Bank. It’s a good use to know whoever she would unexpectedly meet.

Doubts…it occurs whenever she is alone. It is usually difficult to stray away from it, especially whenever she observes carefully on her clan member’s expressions and hopes she hadn’t taken much of their time or day.

History
 
Key Dates:
  • Born in the Moon of Running Prey (2019) 122
Full History:
  • Born around the Moon of Running Prey(2019), was given a name as Amberkit.
  • Apprenticed around the Moon of Leapord’s Rest(2019) as Amberpaw.
  • Earned her warrior name as Ambersmudge, around Moon of First Green(2020)

Kithood || 1-5 moons

When she was able to open her eyes, everything in the nursery seemed interesting and new, but she wasn’t so mobile on her paws yet to stand up properly. Every wobbly step takes a while for Ambersmudge to discover any other kits she would’ve liked to meet. Eventually she does improve well around 2 moons, which gives her a chance to go up to anyone in the nursery den. Yet usually Amber’s dam wouldn’t want her wandering too long and would be brought back to their bedding.

Apprentice || 6-12 moons

There was some excitement and nervousness in the moment she had the leader grant her apprentice name. But the nerves had gone away as Ambersmudge was also introduced to her own mentor. A chance of learning more outside of camp, is an experience she’s been waiting to see for herself. For now though, it was best she has some mannerism and take on hunting or patrolling seriously with her mentor.

At least she takes those typical tasks seriously until she gets distracted with other apprentices she is interested in socializing with, being really playful and openly social with anyone around her. Approaching them with curious questions about everything Ambersmudge had seen outside of camp. Sometimes even encourage further exploration around the clan territories. This would get her in trouble for lacking the focus on her training and skill improvement in hunting.

Her hunting experience is growing slowly, often capable of catching 2 fishes in a day, and getting out of the cold river. It didn’t scare her when she thought about swimming in the river, but she did not expect it to be so cold. Ambersmudge during Moon of Tiger’s Wrath(2019), tried hunting some rodents her mentor discusses that were difficult to hunt. The water-vole was scented at the stream-side area. She began positioning into a crouch, taking careful steps forward with patience, and her eyes stayed wide with focus. In all those steps she provided, the apprentice-self was able to bring back a vole-prey. The environment that rodent was in sure was difficult yet Ambersmudge had succeeded.

Warrior || 13 –  moons

The day after the warrior ceremony, Ambersmudge thought hard about being more mature than how she’s been since the time as an apprentice. She might as well give it a try all while still keeping the pleasant and playful demeanor and using a friendly, welcoming tone. Improvement on her hunting skills on the other hand will take a longer process, and volunteers scheduled hunting patrols that limits her time in camp.

Threads:
Family
 
Sire: Unknown Sire (For characters with an unknown father)
Dam: Pending Dam (Dam will be created after approval)
Pedigree
 
Offspring Parents Grand-parents
Ambersmudge Unknown Sire ()
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Pending Dam Unknown Sire (For characters with an unknown father)
Unknown Dam (For characters with an unknown mother)
Significant Cats
 
Mentor(s):
Pending Mentor (For characters awaiting mentor creation.)
Notes & Additional Details
 
Genetics: This character requires a genetic code to be bred.
Bans Data: Ambersmudge has been compiled into the bans records.
Ambersmudge is a Female Cat with a Tan Non-color restricted pelt of Short Normal textured hair. They are of Medium Size and Common build. Their eyes are Copper and ears are Normal. Their tail is Long, with Normal paws and Normal legs. They are of Non-purebred descent.

2 thoughts on “Ambersmudge”

  1. DESCRIPTIONSentence Fragments: Please address the need for complete sentences.

    PERSONALITY

    • Carries little anxiety during her conversation with anyone she prefers talking to.: Sentence fragment. I feel like you do what I do (kinda bullet point a rough version and then refine) and just missed a few!
    • Hoping she hadn’t taken much of their time or day.: Another fragment.

    HISTORY

    • But wasn’t so mobile on her paws yet.: Fragment.
    • Being really playful and openly social with anyone around her.: Fragment.
    • water-mole was scented: I think it’s supposed to be ‘vole’ rather than ‘mole’? Please let me know if I missed a species!
    • All while still keeping the pleasant demeanor and playfulness.: Fragment.

    A great start! Everything is just details left to address. I suspect you’ll be good to go on the next round!

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