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Greenfang |
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Affiliation
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Warrior of ThunderClan | |
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Vitals
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Living at the age of 69 Moons (5.3 Years)
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Appearance
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| Short Description: |
A lanky brown she-cat with green eyes. |
| Long Description: | Greenfang is a long, stretchy brown she-cat with lanky legs. She’s a slightly paler brown than Moosestride. She’s lithe and snake-like, made for slinking through the darkness of Thunderclan’s forested territory. She has green eyes. |
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Personality
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Greenfang is a vicious, strong she-cat who is determined to make her name in the clans, but has been very unsuccessful so far. She is very open to the idea of having a lot of kits, believing that is how she will stamp her name into the clans, if becoming a great fighter won’t. She, unlike her son, has very little care for other cats outside of Thunderclan, and aims to wound another cat as much as possible when in battle. |
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History
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| Full History: | Greenfang, unlike the father of Moosestride, was not the calmest cat of the bunch. Ever since kithood, she was determined to make her legacy one that would be known among warriors past her age. She’s been unfortunately falling flat on that wish, and has decided for a different destiny. This is to raise as many successful kits as possible. This has, so far, been the only successful part of her plans, especially after Moosestride became leader. She was in no ways distant from Moose, and often pushed him as an apprentice to focus on his strength and to reach for the stars in his future. She considers herself successful, and whenever she sees him today, she smiles upon him gladly, to have been the dame of this tom. |
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Family
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| Sire: | Unknown Sire (For characters with an unknown father) |
| Dam: | Unknown Dam (For characters with an unknown mother) |
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Moosestar (A lanky, dark brown tom with yellow eyes and ripped-up ears) |
| Other Family: | Mother to Moosestar |
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Pedigree
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Significant Cats
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Notes & Additional Details
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| Genetics: | This character has been assigned a genetic code. |
| Bans Data: | Greenfang has been compiled into the bans records. Greenfang is a Female Cat with a Brown Non-color restricted pelt of Short Normal textured hair. They are of Medium Size and Common build. Their eyes are Green and ears are Normal. Their tail is Normal, with Normal paws and Long legs. They are of Non-purebred descent. |
This is just a post-approval request. It’s not serious at all enough to stop the approval.
Appearance – She, unlike her son, has very little care for other cats outside of Thunderclan, and aims to wound another cat as much as possible when in battle.: this is personality the rather thanthe appearance.
Declined. Rinayla’s concern has not yet been addressed.
Notes on Greenfang:
1. Slight powerplay in this comment “She’s been described as “sleek and snake-like” with how she moves through the clan territories.” Just need to reword the statement so that it doesn’t put words into other cats’ mouths!
Example: “she’s referred to herself as long and snake-like” or “she’s thought herself akin to that of a snake in the way she moves throughout the clan’s territories”