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Splashpelt

Splashpelt
A Player Character played by MegaBoo

Affiliation
Warrior of RiverClan
Vitals
A Male cat.
By Pending Sire out of Pending Dam.
Living at the age of 22 Moons (1.7 Years)
Appearance
 
Short Descrpition: A large, square chested chocolate classic tabby tom
Long Descrpition:

He is a tall chocolate marble tabby tom. His name has never really related to how he looked but some other cats have asked if his name Splashpelt had anything to do with his pelt being a marbled tabby but at the start it did then it turned in to his off the wall personality. Being a tall wide built guy with a marble tabby markings. But his personality being far different then his looks. Lastly he has blue eyes.

Personality
 
 

As his name implies he is a very clumsy cat that gets messed up with names and things that are going on in the clans. Despite all of that he has sharp memories of the clans and the cats in then. SplashPelt has been told to keep his heart in his chest and not lend out trust like candy, he never pays mind to that and lets out his trust to others that he should not have. He is a chatter box and loves saying whats in his mind to others, as a resolution of that he is a very empathetic cat he will always sit down with others and try to help them as much as he can. But it is hard to get his words out because he cant talk that well and stumbles over words or talks too fast for others to understand, when he try’s to help others he can mess up and the other to not understand what he is saying.

History
 
Key Dates:
  • Born in the Moon of Cheetah's Flight (2018)
Full History:

{} Kitttenhood 0 – 6 {}

There was not much that happened in his kit days. But the most interesting thing that happened was that one time when he was about 3 moons old and got dragged out of camp by his litter-mate ,he made a mental map of the way they came from and the littler-mate got lost and scared but he led them back to camp and he got mud on his pelt. And got a ear full about going out of camp and that they could have gotten hurt. But the rest of the kit days where spent with his 3 litter-mates his parents in calm until they became apprentices.

{} Apprentice days 6 – 12 {}

When he first started being a Apprentice he was scared. Just because he was scared of who he would get as a mentor and just the outside the few times he was out where with his parents and that one time with his sibling. But he got lucky and got a mentor that loved Splashpaw like a mother. This mentor and him got along so well and saw each other like mother and son and good thing because something happened that changed Splashpaw. His mother and father where out hunting one day and an his mother got killed by a mother fox protecting her cubs and his Father was found a few feet away dead. This changed Splashpaw and he clung on to his mentor and she became a mother to the mourning Splashpaw. But he continued his training and became of a ok skill to move on to a warrior.

{} Warrior age 12 – Present {}

Splashpaw who was now known as Splashpelt. and he sat his vigile watching the stars questing the place where his parents went and what star they where. The first day being a warrior well to say was a mess for him tripping over his paws as he was on patrol for the first time and stumbling over his words all of the stress of being a warrior for the first day being pilled on him but he was told of a tale of a dog that was in camp during the time the Boldstar was a new warrior to! It was a good story Splashpelt knew and he loved story’s so he told him self when he was a elder to tell tales of Boldstars bravery and stupidity at times. Splashpelt getting the trust of others for then to tell them there sad story’s and him saying he would preserve them for all of time. Letting others talk to him about the things troubling him. but some times tales of old never made others happy so he was always there but now its the present day and he needed to be there for what the new story’s the new life he was in being 21 now ,wow one year younger then that day of Boldstars Dog fight.

Family
 
Sire: Pending Sire (Sire will be created after approval)
Dam: Pending Dam (Dam will be created after approval)
Full Siblings:
Pending Dam (Dam will be created after approval)
Genealogy & Pedigree
 
Offspring Parents Grand-parents
Splashpelt Pending Sire Unknown Sire (For characters with an unknown father)
Unknown Dam (For characters with an unknown mother)
Pending Dam Unknown Sire (For characters with an unknown father)
Unknown Dam (For characters with an unknown mother)
Significant Cats
 
Mentor(s):
Pending Mentor (For characters awaiting mentor creation.)
Others:

Ambereye (Mentor not made yet) These guys have a Son and Mother relationship, After the death of his mother they became closer and Ambereye is basically his new mother.

Notes & Additional Details
 
General:

Splashpelt is going to be my main but he will never be Deputy or Med. SpashPelt will be updated as the story continues because he is only 21 and he looks up to BoldStar.

Genetics: This character requires a genetic code to be bred.
Bans Data: Splashpelt has not been compiled into the bans records.

This character sheet was last updated on 2022-03-25 08:18

2 thoughts on “Splashpelt”

  1. I’m approving Splashpelt, but do have a list of typos for you to address before you start role playing.

    Appearance: of the wall personality – Typo. I think you meant “off the wall”, not “of the wall”.

    Personality

    • stumps over words – Typo. I think you wanted “stumbles”, not “stumps”.
    • talks to fast for others – Typo. “to” should be “too”.

    History

    • being a Apprentice – Typo. “a” should be “an”.
    • scared of how he would get – Typo. I think you wanted “who” and not “how”.
    • But he got luck and – Typo. I think “luck” was meant to be “lucky”.
    • Splashpaw now known as Splashpelt. – Typo. Missed the word “was” between “Splashpaw” and “now”.
  2. Splashpelt has been declined at this time. Here is a list of the issues that need to be addressed.

    GeneralName capitalization: Unlike clan names warrior names don’t have a capitalized letter on the second word.

    Appearance

    • Being a tall chocolate brown tom that can scare new cats to SplashPelt. – Sentence fragment.
    • his of the wall personality – Just a typo. I think you meant “off the wall”.
    • Being a tall wide built guy with a marble tabby markings, also being a dark brown tom can be scary to cats smaller to him and make people think he is a bold or a feared fighter with his ice cold eyes and yellow teeth and the small scar on his cheek even more so! – Powerplaying. You can’t control how other characters react to your character, only describe the traits that you feel inspire the feelings.
    • But his personality being far different then his looks. – Another sentence fragment.

    Personality

    • As his name implies he is a very clumsy cat that gets messed up a lot in what is going on in and out of the clan. – CoSC’s RiverClan camp (what I think this refers to) isn’t on an island. Please consult our RiverClan page’s territory link for more details.

    History

    • After that he was called SplashKit originally he was called PineKit but his parents relished that he was of the wall and after that and the mud on his pelt SplashKit came to be. – Names are given through sacred ceremonies before StarClan. Names don’t simply get changed without a big fuss being kicked up. Most leaders wouldn’t even permit it for a kit, since it would be a whole ceremony for something that could just be changed to better fit when the kit became an apprentice.
    • After 4 moons of mentoring with this mentor he was switched to a new one because the leader saw that the mentor at the time hated training and so they switched with a mentor that loved SplashPaw like a mother. – Switching mentors is another sacred ceremony that is considered carefully. The leader knows their Senior Warriors well… We’d need permission from Faux for Dunestar to have put a cat who hated teaching in the position of Mentor.
    • This new mentor and him got alone so well – Typo. I think alone was meant to be along.
    • mother to the morning SplashPaw – Typo. morning should be mourning.
    • He picked the last name to honor his Father. – Clan cats don’t pick their own names. Names are picked and given by the leader. You’d have to check with Faux, the leader player, for permission for him to have even been consulted for opinions on what his name was to be.
    • The first day being a warrior well to say was a mess for him trying to make friends – He would have been working on patrols alongside his mentor with these same cats his entire apprenticeship and known them since he was a kit.
    • Letting others cry on his shoulder – Cats can’t cry.
    • loved telling the story’s of his past that always made the others fell better – Powerplay. You can’t control how others react to your characters’ story.

    Significant Cats: BettaFeather (Second Mentor) – I’m sorry, but Bettas are not a part of the Clan Cats’ world. The word is not eligible for use in a name here at CoSC.

    I know it seems like a lot, but it’s not unusual for a person to have a longer list their first time through the CoSC approvals process. We have a lot of standards other games done. If you have any questions at all please reach out to me. – Kitsufox

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