A Non-player Character played by freerangerage

Apprentice of ThunderClan
A Male cat.
By Oakbound out of Quailcall.
Dead at the age of 10 Moons (0.8 Years)
Short Description:

A lanky, red agouti tabby with blue eyes and large ears

Long Description:

A long-legged tom with large blue eyes and massive ears that were unusually expressive – he never was able to hide his emotions easily. He had massive, webbed paws and his angular face was shaped like a triangle. His coloration is red agouti tabby, with a white blaze, underbelly and mittens. He could have been handsome, if he had grown into his mismatched features.


Easygoing, and reckless. He loved without hesitation, leaped before looking and was much more of a follower than a leader. He always wanted to be involved in what is going on in the camp. Due to his sharp mind and fast reflexes, he was an excellent hunter. He took orders easily and executed with the best of his ability.

Sparrowpaw could have been called an airhead at best, and utterly dense at worst. His cheerful demeanour kept him from taking anything seriously, to his detriment. He always hyper-focused on the task at hand, to the extent that he was unable to see dangers in his surroundings.

Key Dates:
  • Born in the Moon of First Green (2019)
  • Made an Apprentice as Sparrowpaw in ThunderClan during the Moon of Cheetah's Flight (2019)
  • Died in the Moon of Long Nights (2019)
Full History:

Kit: 0 moons – 6 moons

Sparrowkit was born alongside his sibling Sunkit, the two of them very close. Sparrowkit was able to hold his own in the nursery as a troublesome and mischievous kitten; although most cats didn’t know that most of his ideas came from his quiet sister.

Sparrowkit was known for being somewhat reckless, and his sister’s encouragement did nothing to stem his desire for adventure. He has scolded multiple times for attempting to sneak out of camp and surprise attacking apprentices.

Apprentice: 6 moons – 10 moons

Sparrowpaw and Sunpaw were apprenticed in their 6th moon. The siblings stood tall as they took their oaths, excited at the prospect of working together to better their clan.

Sparrowpaw took to apprenticehood like a fish to water; his ever cheerful attitude was an asset when dealing with grumpy elders, inclement weather and minor scratches and bruises. It seemed he was unflappable – always ready for the next great adventure, or the next direction from his mentor. If anything many could have found him overbearing with his exuberance.

Sparrowpaw’s life was cut short in his 10th moon as he was struck by a monster on Thunderpath. He had attempted to attack a loner that wandered into Thunderclan territory. As he ran, he lost sight of where he was – Sunpaw’s warnings fell on deaf ears as he ran onto the Thunderpath to his demise. Sunpaw witnessed her brother’s death, and felt overwhelmingly guilty for being unable to help her brother.

Sire: Oakbound (A scarred, brown ticked tomcat with copper eyes and mangled tail)
Dam: Quailcall (A small red ticked bicolor she-cat with large ears and whispery voice)
Full Siblings:
Sunstrike (An angular, red ticked bicolor she-cat with copper eyes)
Offspring Parents Grand-parents
Sparrowpaw Oakbound Unknown Sire (For characters with an unknown father)
Unknown Dam (For characters with an unknown mother)
Quailcall Gingerthrash (A scarred ticked lilac caramel tomcat with amber eyes)
Unknown Dam (For characters with an unknown mother)

[Genealogy Details]

Significant Cats
Pending Mentor (For characters awaiting mentor creation.)
Notes & Additional Details
Genetics: This character requires a genetic code to be bred.
Bans Data: Sparrowpaw has been compiled into the bans records.
Sparrowpaw is a Male Cat with a Red Non-color restricted pelt of Short Normal textured hair. They are of Medium Size and Semi-foreign build. Their eyes are Blue and ears are Normal. Their tail is Normal, with Normal paws and Normal legs. They are of Non-purebred descent.

2 thoughts on “Sparrowpaw”

  1. Overall: Make sure everything is in past tense since he’s passed on.

    Appearance: “Long-legged Tom, with large blue eyes and massive ears that were unusually expressive – it is extremely easy to tell what he is thinking.” – To avoid any use of power play, make use of words like ‘seeming’ or seemingly’ instead of writing in certainties. Some clanmates might not be know what he’s thinking even with super expressive ears..

    * “He was a natural hunter, and very quickwitted.” Could be worded “Due to his quickwitted nature, he took to hunting with a natural finesse’ or something like that.

    * “Sparrowkit quickly made a name for himself in the nursery as a troublesome and mischievous kitten; although most cats didn’t know that most of his ideas came from his quiet sister.” – Sparrowkit and Sunkit also shared the nursery with Savagefox as a kit, who was also a naughty kit.
    * “even purposefully biting onto Goldenstar’s tail.” – Just checking if you got permission from Splashy on this event, lol.
    * ‘elder’ – you probably mean elders.
    * “If anything the clan found him overbearing with his exuberance.” – ‘could have found him overbearing’ to avoid powerplay

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