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Hazelbark

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This character sheet was last updated on 2024-04-24 10:20

Hazelbark
A Non-player Character played by HummingDaze

Affiliation
 Warrior of ShadowClan
Vitals
A Female cat who identifies Female.
By Unknown Sire out of Unknown Dam.
Living at the age of 44 Moons (3.4 Years)
Appearance
  
Short Description:

Long Description:

She is a long haired Mackerel tabby, with yellow colored eyes. Slightly inches taller than her kin(Brackenwing). Her ears, legs and rest of the tail have darkened black stripes, and a highlight of bright gray-brown. Where those lighter colors are around the face and Hazlebark’s back.
Personality
  
 

Hazelbark is very social. She’d enjoy starting a conversation with any familiar clan-mate(s) about anything. And won’t mind listening to her own clan-mates time too. Hazelbark also shares a caring nature, sympathizing easily with anyone who is distressed or needs comfort from a troubling problem.

She isn’t a strict Dame to her kin, Brackenwing. Hazelbark only seeks to tell valuable clan-life lessons and communicate with them.
History
  
Key Dates:
  • Born in the Moon of First Green (2017)
Full History:
  • She was born and named Hazelkit, during the Moon of First Green(2017)
  • The name changed to Hazelpaw, as she became an apprentice, during the Moon of Lion’s Glory(2017)
  • During the Moon of Unnamed Blue(2018), She is given the warrior name as Hazelbark

Kithood: 0-5 moons

Hazelbark was named Hazelkit, around the Moon of Cheetah’s Flight(2017). Hazelkit was energetic as a kit, who’d start rapidly scurrying around the nursery den as she grew and learned how to walk on her paws. It was also during the time she met the “soon to be mate” around the Moon of Unnamed Blue(2017). Hazelkit and this kit became friends in the nursery den. Bonding for the majority of times together.

Apprenticeship: 6-11 moons

Her name around the time, as an apprentice, is Hazelpaw.
Family
  
Sire: Unknown Sire (For characters with an unknown father)
Dam: Unknown Dam (For characters with an unknown mother)
Offspring: Brackenwing (A brown non-binary mackerel tabby with green eyes)
Pedigree
  
Offspring Parents Grand-parents
Hazelbark Unknown Sire ()
()
Unknown Dam ()
()
Significant Cats
  
Notes & Additional Details
  
Genetics: This character requires a genetic code to be bred.
Bans Data: Hazelbark has not been compiled into the bans records.

1 thought on “Hazelbark”

  1. Hi Hummingdaze! Just so you know, this NPC gets treated more like a typical character due to still being alive. There are a few things that need to be addressed, but solid overall.

    Rank: Senior Warrior – Unlike most of the warriors fandom here at CoSC we consider Senior Warriors to be the inner circle of the Leader rather than something that’s just granted when a cat is ‘of a certain age’. Please see this document

    Long Description: Her ear, legs and rest – Just a typo. I think ear was meant to be ears?

    Personality

    • Sentence Fragments – There are a high number of incomplete sentences in this area.
    • is a prideful […] one – This is never supported in the personality in any way, rendering it a powerplay.

    History

    • Grammar – The history overall needs to a good grammar check. There are alot of very confusingly worded and difficult to read sections that should be clarified.
    • As soon as she grew and learned how to walk on her paws. – Incomplete sentence.
    • wonderful time spent she had with her living mate – Please take a look at the Mates & Mating document. Here at CoSC the clan members ‘mate’, they don’t ‘have mates’. The documents cover it in more detail. Let me know if you have questions.
    • Pregnancy Timeline – Please clarify the timeline of the death of the sire of her litter and the start of her pregnancy. The way it’s currently laid out suggests many months (maybe even a year) between the sire dying and her becoming pregnant.
    • Knowing well that she will not ever feel alone and is looking forward on taking care of her kit. – Is she so disconected from her clan that she felt only a cat of her bloodline would do? Please clarify the wording, as right now it sounds like she felt alone despite living shoulder-to-shoulder with an entire camp full of other cats.

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