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This character sheet was last updated on 2024-03-31 04:19
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Vixenswarm |
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Affiliation
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Warrior of ShadowClan | |
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Vitals
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A Female cat who identifies Female.
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Living at the age of 29 Moons (2.2 Years)
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Appearance
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| Long Description: | She is a large, tall cat with spindly legs. Her coat is elegant and long, being brindled in color. Her pelt is very dark, being an array of blacks, reds, browns and dull white. Her chin and some of her muzzle is white, along with her left front toes. Amber eyes are almost enough to unsettle every cat she glares at. |
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Personality
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Vixenswarm is a very spiteful and confrontational cat. Despite this, she is a very loyal cat to those she loves. Being spiteful, this also leads her to some aggression. Overall, her personality is very negative, and she is also very confidential. Vixenswarm hates attention unless she is hissing back at another who can’t hold their tongue. She is a huge pessimist and does not associate with starclan. |
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History
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Notes & Additional Details
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| Genetics: | This character requires a genetic code to be bred. |
| Bans Data: | Vixenswarm has not been compiled into the bans records. |
Hello and welcome to Chosen of Starclan! Its not unusual for new players to have a few rounds of edits! We are around on the discord if you have any questions, but for now, I will have to decline this application this round for these following reasons:
Appearance:
– ” Amber eyes are almost enough to unsettle every cat she glares at.” – Powerplay. Here we try not to describe anything that involves how others would perceive your character.
Personality:
– “Being spiteful, this also leads her to some aggression. Overall, her personality is very negative, and she is also very confidential. ” – Negativity that could lead to aggression could be seen as some sort of detriment to the everyday duties of a warrior. It could affect her duties and that could lead to someone getting hurt, which could eventually lead to exile if it were bad enough. A warrior who cant do their duties and can’t be trusted can’t be relied on. Please elaborate these negative aspects of her personality, but we recommend they have some good traits too!
– “She is a huge pessimist and does not associate with starclan.” – Pessimism is allowed, however, not associating with Starclan would be highly stigmatized by the clan as a whole.
History:
– History needs at least 3 paragraphs of at least 4 sentences each, plus an additional 4 sentences per year over the age of 2 (24 moons). So for a character that is 29 moons old, you’d need to write 4 paragraphs.
You have a good start. Once you finish these edits, request your check again!